Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Backpack Critique


  • Good design with good perspective
  • Need to have a human element
  • The place where the strap connects on the right drawing seems to be a little off
  • good construction lines on left bag
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  • nice perspective
  • could go a little dark on the object
  • good use of color
  • nto sure how i feel about the vignette and its too dark

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  • Nice shading
  • good use of the red pencil
  • be a little more detailed 
  • the added elements are a nice touch
  • nice construction lines